Kingdom of Sea and Wind If I were to be Reincarnated I’ll be Popular?
Author : Rika
Going back after he first date. Sou died because saving a kid who tried to get his ball.
Feeling sympathized, the god of death make him reincarnated as a prince.However, the god of death makes a mistake which make Sou retain his previous memories.
Reincarnated as the 6th prince of an oceanic kingdom, grown up inside of the inner palace
sou the popular life is started,the world of “SLOW LIFE” will soon change both the world and the culture
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This World's Work 
Dude you need some editors. Your English is not bad but there are still some mistakes.
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okay there are quite a lot of mistakes
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want to ask whats the translation release rate?
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My suggestion after reading this is to get a someone to look over the chapters and edit them. It feels like a slightly cleaned up MTL right now.
For example:
There’s no effort to make sure the nouns are plural or not. There’s “man” where there should be “men” etc etc.
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Also make sure the person who looks over it is competent at English, don’t know many “edited chapters” I’ve seen with easy to fix mistakes everywhere.
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Also I suggest creating an index page with links to all the chapters. Then looking up the “read more” function on WordPress to clean the main page up a little bit.
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Thanks for translating this
This novel sure good.
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a better table of contents is needed
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I reaaallyyy want to kill the drawer of this novel ~
What the fuck with that children drawing!?
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oh shit what the fuck?
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If you compare to other novel…
They are much lucky have a good drawer…
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oh man that’s such a turn off
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I take back my comment
the publisher is who must we blame!!
https://book.mynavi.jp/ec/products/?pageID=2
the other novel drawing in that publisher is like ” the company recurt so-so drawer and reduce the cost for print and drawing because it is first time for them play light novel item so they play save (2016, see the date of publish in amazon)…”
FUCK
and the price is fuck too!!! what the hell with 400 yen!?
the other novel cost is 700-1200 yen!!!!!!
don’t recurt a so-so drawer for the author who does reach 350+ chapter and have write since 2011, you shity publisher…
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el psoe ha hecho propuestas durante toda la leaiglstura para paliar un poco la situacion del paro, como con el plan e hacer pequeñas obras en muchos lugares del pueblo necesitando mas mano de obra y joaquin prefirio su avenida de las americas con poca mano de obra.
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what da hell are they doing here?!Get the hell out!Why keep Area 51 and Alien true a secret eh!? What the hell have you got to hide.Just trying to piss people off acting as if they are above the law!
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